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 Post subject: Re: Machsuit
PostPosted: Thu Mar 08, 2018 9:24 pm 
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I feel like it'd be nice if the head had some slightly different colours, just to make it more separate from the body. Just because the whole thing (body and head) is quite busy with details, so there's nothing simple to focus on, such as a face. Or maybe that piece around his neck could be more prominent to help separate the head from the body visually.

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 Post subject: Re: Machsuit
PostPosted: Sat Mar 10, 2018 6:12 am 
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Hello Roger. There is some good feedback there.
I have submitted the picture already on my portfolios a few days ago.

I do think I will make some more cinematic scene for my character and then I will keep your input in mind.

I have to make a spaceship for work. Perhaps I put this guy in it and render him once I am done with that asset.


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 Post subject: Re: Machsuit
PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2018 5:59 am 
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This is a priviz of what I mentioned above


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 Post subject: Re: Machsuit
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 Post subject: Re: Machsuit
PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2018 9:26 am 
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Cool. In terms of composition, there's a lot of light on his thighs and right fingers. I'd tone those way down so his face and upper body seem more important.

How does he get in and out of the spaceship?

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