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 Post subject: Up and away.
PostPosted: Sat May 03, 2014 9:50 am 
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This is a image I made in an afternoon just for fun. I am often happy with the result of my work. But I do feel they do lack saturation and motion. So this was an attempt to practice that. I am happy with the aesthetic result but I there is some stuff that would have acquired some more work to make the execution perfect. But the hours I spent on it was only to have fun, I thought I might share it.


I didn’t think of it when I started but I guess he has some resemblance to characters like the silver surfer or Dr. Manhattan

Hope you enjoy!


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 Post subject: Re: Up and away.
PostPosted: Sat May 03, 2014 10:59 am 
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As I was on my way home I realiced that I had one more correction that had to be done, so on the touch pad I took out the image and changed it to look like this.

Now I don't think I will pick this up again!


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 Post subject: Re: Up and away.
PostPosted: Sat May 03, 2014 3:01 pm 
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Reminds me of the MDS logo for some reason hehe. Areas to be improved would be the shading on the planets & bringing out the stars and bright spots in the background, otherwise cool little project.
Good to see you branching out!


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 Post subject: Re: Up and away.
PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2014 7:21 am 
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yes, a lot of things could be better. Perhaps they would be easy fixes but as I was making this I just renderd passes, layers and saving the image out and then continue working and had a few crashes. What you see is not made out of one render and some of it is not retrievable. I have to live with what it looks like because of that but I would lie if I said I wasn't happy with it, I had fun and find it aesthetically pleasing to a level where I feel I can leave it.

Thanks you for the nice feedback!


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 Post subject: Re: Up and away.
PostPosted: Mon Sep 08, 2014 5:00 pm 
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well i cant really add much more of a critique but i love this dude great work man

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