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Author:  yeefoong [ Thu Jun 13, 2013 3:32 am ]
Post subject:  the transform wip - CONTAIN MILD NUDITY

this a wip im working on. Would like to have some fresh eye on it while im still in the process instead of after its fin.

the concept is a female transforming into lizard dragon creature. Cloth tearing as she changes. In pain as well.
As in what she is reaching out for, im not sure. She is not aware of her condition.

Planning to add burning effect on her hair/body. So gonna to have some smokin !

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Author:  oatestwder [ Thu Jun 13, 2013 1:59 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: the transform wip

this is just for a 2d drawing right, not going to 3d?

My immediate thought is make it a bit more of a dynamic pose, not so side on. I did a quick doodle but forgot about having the arm raised, you get the idea though. If you don't want to change the pose just establishing some stronger directional lighting would help. At the moment Its like light is just coming from everywhere

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Author:  yeefoong [ Thu Jun 13, 2013 5:22 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: the transform wip - CONTAIN MILD NUDITY

Hiya Oat, thanks for your time ! I did thought about poses similar to urs.
I wanted the silhouette easier to be read just as the ref I attached
I am kinda following the lighting on the ref for now, after you mention about it, I did feel that its too flat.
Yeh will probably go into 3D in the future, but am now working on another male sculpt.

Thanks !

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Author:  Worzel [ Thu Jun 13, 2013 5:32 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: the transform wip - CONTAIN MILD NUDITY

The thing that stood out to me in that first image, is that there is no "pain". The face will be the thing that most shows she's in pain (from looking at that pose... which isn't a 'writhing in pain' pose), so we need to see the face clearly if that's an important part of the story. Being on fire won't show emotion, especially if we see the face and the expression contradicts that feeling.

Nice art work btw. :thumbsup:

Author:  oatestwder [ Thu Jun 13, 2013 6:07 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: the transform wip - CONTAIN MILD NUDITY

Agree with worzel. I like the wip you did where you can see the whole face, gives it more of a story and means she can show pain.

Also The ref Has much stronger lighting than yours at the moment. Like i said it will help

Author:  yeefoong [ Fri Jun 14, 2013 6:03 am ]
Post subject:  Re: the transform wip - CONTAIN MILD NUDITY

Awesome crits as always. Gave her a face ! tears. ( anger / pain)
Really made a big diff with facial expression. So important..
Lighting is the next that cant be taken lightly.

Thanks !
Yeefoong

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Author:  yeefoong [ Fri Jun 21, 2013 1:10 am ]
Post subject:  Re: the transform wip - CONTAIN MILD NUDITY

Trying to integrate the horn better, might show her face more and hair flowing behind the horn.
Did a little study on the pose and adjusted the perspective a bit, can see the right breast/hip a little based on Oat crits.
Got into detail too early and now pretty much start from value paint and covered all the details zzz

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Author:  yeefoong [ Wed Jun 26, 2013 3:35 am ]
Post subject:  Re: the transform wip - CONTAIN MILD NUDITY

the transform

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Author:  Worzel [ Wed Jun 26, 2013 10:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: the transform wip - CONTAIN MILD NUDITY

Makes me think of that dude from District 9, slowly turning into an alien.

Author:  yeefoong [ Thu Jun 27, 2013 9:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: the transform wip - CONTAIN MILD NUDITY

This sure have that atmosphere now u mention it ! lol
This piece have so many mistakes in the lighting.

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