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 Post subject: Animation Work in Progress
PostPosted: Thu Aug 04, 2016 7:14 pm 

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Currently working on an animation assignment for the course I'm taking, and was hoping to get any feedback I could on where to go from here and how to get things looking good. Any help would be greatly appreciated!

 Post subject: Re: Animation Work in Progress
PostPosted: Wed Aug 10, 2016 1:27 am 
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What's the line for that second one? It's a bit hard to understand.

The girls pose from the start doesn't seem right. The hand behind the head, with the arm across the body, seems quite unnatural, especially by the 6 second mark. By 10 seconds it feels worse, since the hands don't change and she's turning away even more. The pose feels forced by that point.

With the arms crossing the body, it feels like you're trying to do some shy/defensive/worried type of gesture, but the facial expression isn't matching at the end.

Listening to her voice, it seems fairly flat... without much emotion in it, but the body language and facial expressions seem quite strong in places, which doesn't really match. Maybe have another listen to the intensity of the audio, and make sure the contrast in the voice is matched in the contrasting actions/expressions she makes with her face and body. Don't force the acting if it's not apparent in the voice.

Good work so far! Looking forward to more!

Roger Feron
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