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 Post subject: Rendered Images with Lighting
PostPosted: Wed Dec 05, 2012 9:45 am 
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I have learning 3D for 3 months and Raffles,
new to nzcgi forum, and would be much appreciated if I have some feedback on my work.


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 Post subject: Re: Rendered Images with Lighting
PostPosted: Wed Dec 05, 2012 5:53 pm 
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Sorry for the bad english :oops:

I didn't double check (v___v)

I meant to write:
I have been learning 3D for 3 months now at Raffles.
I am new to nzcgi forum, and it would be much appreciated if I have some feedback on my work.

Thank you :nodding:

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 Post subject: Re: Rendered Images with Lighting
PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2012 2:19 pm 
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hi

warm rim light on apples is good, careful about easily repeating the same grunge textures on the door bolts, break it up a bit.

sword looks cool, overall the scenes are very busy, don't put to many competing elements in the image, my eye was drawn to the lighter and contrasty piece in the clock and tv? on the wall rather than the sword, colours are good but you could try desaturate the image, think about integration and history, scratches and damage on things, grudge under steps, could add more materials to the sword as it looks like one piece of metal. I had a play in photoshop with your picture hope you don't mind.


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 Post subject: Re: Rendered Images with Lighting
PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2012 8:12 pm 
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Hi,
Thank you for your advise.

I very much appreciated it and follow your advise.

The image you produced on photoshop is so cool !
I was wondering if you can teach me how you did that? :O

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